I can quote the whole poem because each line, each word is filled with an in depth loyalty, faithful love for someone who seems to be far from your view.

The images make this poem come out alive and grab my interest. It yearns as it reaches out for something which seems to elude from your grasp. A touching write...so beautifully sad..take care.

This is just so lovely, Awwwww love, such a beautiful thing. You have put so much into your words. Loved it!

This is perfect.

Hello Koan,

"I hunted you" refrain demonstrates well how desperately love is longed for.

I really like the clear layout and description - it is as deep as the depicted desire.

Well done,

Michael

Judging Comment

Koan knows how to write his heart on a cloud, during a thunderstorm! That's how powerful and magical this poem is!

To yearn for a person whom they have never met perhaps or to miss a loved one is the mood I felt within this elegant and graceful poem! Just lovely!

Very Nice!!!