September (Acrostics/Monorhyme)

by Meena Krish   Sep 29, 2016


Sun's temper gradually vacates the place
Ember of tragedy leaves its lasting trace,
Pocketful of colors fall, form a rainbow lace
Time captures nature's beauty and grace,
Entwined fingers spawn an autumn craze
Marking their love upon a bare oak's face,
Building homes, gathering food birds race
Eager kids play the days whilst adults chase,
Retiring summer...dies in winter's embrace.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hey Meena,

    I really liked this acrostic your word choice was great and it didn't feel forced atall, flowed really well and your imagery was fantastic!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is just lovely, I was blown away by the visuals you wove throughout. So beautiful!

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    A fabulous acrostic with great imagery.

    Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Meena,

    A wonderful acrostic, written with the added challenge of monorhyme.

    Well done,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Superb, great rhyming and visuals love it have just nominated - Milly x

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