Magic

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Oct 1, 2016


Can you touch and kiss my lips?
I long for that coz you never did it.
Can't wait any longer to cover me with your arms,
The warm of your embraces that I wish for all the time.

I think the earth and the galaxy,
Are surely made for you and me
The sands, the seas, and the clouds,
I'll give it all for you, my love.

Can you hold my hands like you did before?
The way you looked at me I'll never ask for more
Your pearly white teeth
When you smiled look so sweet, it's like MAGIC....!

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such a sweet little piece about that special someone.

    Loved the middle stanza, so cute.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Nice Gel, emotions propel the words, I like how you bring in Nature also.

    Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ahh, lovely, Gel. When we find that special someone, they really can consume our every waking hour, can't they? It seems like you have...

    Take care and stay well,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hi Gel.

    Another good love poem. But I have some suggestions. It's just a suggestion.

    I don't think touch is necessary in the first line.

    You can make this a bit more romantic -

    Can you hold me and kiss my lips

    2nd line -

    I long for that coz you never did it.

    You can use -

    I'm like a dry land because you never did it.

    3rd line - You can use this

    I am so eager to mingle with your arms.

    For the rest of the below lines; still I think you could've made it even more magical, connecting some more enthralling romance.

    But very well done for this too.

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