Hi Gel.

Another good love poem. But I have some suggestions. It's just a suggestion.

I don't think touch is necessary in the first line.

You can make this a bit more romantic -

Can you hold me and kiss my lips

2nd line -

I long for that coz you never did it.

You can use -

I'm like a dry land because you never did it.

3rd line - You can use this

I am so eager to mingle with your arms.

For the rest of the below lines; still I think you could've made it even more magical, connecting some more enthralling romance.

But very well done for this too.

Ahh, lovely, Gel. When we find that special someone, they really can consume our every waking hour, can't they? It seems like you have...

Take care and stay well,

Ben

Nice Gel, emotions propel the words, I like how you bring in Nature also.

Ken

Such a sweet little piece about that special someone.

Loved the middle stanza, so cute.

Em