Comments : Cherry Blossoms (Form - Rhyme)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Augustus,

    This is a lovely poem, indeed, which is melodic throughout and a pleasure to read.
    Wistful and lulling, this rhyming piece from you is a real success. Well done, my friend.

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Augustus,

    I agree with Sir Ben. .. This is lovely ...
    You rock. .. I love this. ..and I know she will love this also. ..

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such a joy to read with beautiful imagery.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Such a lovely poem. I loved the visuals you portrayed. Isn't it funny how things inspire us to write? Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Augustus,

    a well written poem from you. Although I haven't watched the film, your words have breathed a pleasant flavour of it. The loss of love, the memories of a promise and the hope to see one another again in a world where life is so much better, sweeter. Amen to that!

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Darkness

    You aare master writer