Love acrostic

by Phil   Oct 5, 2016


Love can make us feel
Overly excitable and
Very much
Envious of every person we see with our lover.

Note: I am only just starting out.

PW 05/10/2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Phil, first off welcome! You are just starting out and you throw in this lovely acrostic? Looking forward to seeing more work from you, well done!

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil

      Many thanks Brenda

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi Phil and welcome.

    This is a lovely acrostic that shows love in a different light and it can be rather exciting but jealous can over ride sometimes.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil

      Thank you all so much for the warm welcome and wonderful comments.

      PW

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Welcome Phil!

    I adore small and elegant acrostics!

    To love and admire someone you can not have, or at least at the moment can be heartbreaking...

    You captured that feeling quite nicely here...well done!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, a warm welcome indeed to the site, Phil.
    Secondly, despite your footnote, this is a good little acrostic that's insightful in no small measure.
    Love can make us feel myriads of emotions, ranging from exuberance to misery of the worst kind!

    Well done, keep writing and all the best,

    Ben

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