Comments : Lord

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Ken,
    I can relate to this. Sometimes we ask for something then we don't get it easily coz God is preparing something better for us...
    I like the way you ask then answer it all by yourself..

    and this is my favorite stanza-->

    This is not my Lord, who gives rather than takes, when He made us in His own image that was no mistake. He does not dwell in things made by hands or labor. He has chosen to dwell in us as His Temple, hidden in vessels of clay, that gleam in the beggar's eye may be the Holy Spirit saying "Hi".

    nice and great piece Ken

    Gel

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Gel, love your comments!

  • 8 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Much thanks Gel, not sure about the time limit on Nominations.

    TTYS,

    Ken

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great write, as ever Ken, and your faith shines through like a beacon in the dark!

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Ben, I could not want a better praise than that!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Ken this is a wonderful written piece with so much thought gone into it an edge rhyming is unforced which always make pieces read much smoother.

    1: I guess that he never gets bored looking down on us 'humans' and everything we are doing to the world he created, I reckon he is pretty peed off though.

    2: This made me laugh for some reason maybe it was the imagery of him laughing so much trying to catch people with his lightening bolts but not being that cruel As to zap them.

    3: Here your love and faith shines through with wonderful imagery.

    4: You're right we should be thankful for the life we have been given even if it seems like a bad life as each day is a blessing.

    5: Loved this because we all nee his guidance sometimes and even though I am not a great believer I always try to pray.

    6: So very true.

    7: No I guess he made us all to perfection when he made us which is why none of us should judge but unfortunately we do and alot.

    A great write as always.
    Em

    • 7 years ago

      by CRAFTY KEN

      Thanks Em, I love how you broke down and commented about each line, very professional!

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Whao!!! Brother Ken, this is marvellous! It's 5/5 from here! Stay blessed, gem!