The Apprentice

by Maple Tree   Oct 5, 2016


Darkness brews an
evil that lurks within
a split mind,
psychopath
is born upon
a star of death.

Horned, disfigured
eyes of the bloodiest
river, flowing electric
veins connect with
a light saber, slashing.

Darth Sideous's love child-

a spawn of horned evil
evolution gone wrong.

The universe of mayhem
cradles cells of a demon,
hatred welcomes....

Darth Maul.

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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    OMG! I love this Andrea.. Almost as much as I love Star Wars.. Everyones kind of said everything so Ill leave it with; Well done!
    Nominated.. :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maple Tree

      Awww deeply delightful , thank you!!!!!
      I'm happy you enjoyed this!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Andrea,

    The darkness you paint on this canvass is vivid. A fictional character, Darth Maul. His evil power anchored firmly in the dark side. I can see the fight, the lights and the battle between dark and light forces...

    Who will win?

    Dum, dum, dum, dum, de , dum, dum, de, dum...

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, such a dark piece with amazing visuals! I agree with Em, we all have some darkness, some days it's a fight not to let it win. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, a very dark piece. I like your wording. I think darkness brews in us all b it only a few of us let it get to us (if that makes sense.)

    Em

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