Dark days

by Zoe   Oct 6, 2016


If you punch me, I will get off the ground and stand tall
If you kill me, I come back alive and haunt you
If you throw me in the pits of hell,
I will rise again to the Earth with a army
If you make my days dark, I will make yours deplorable
If you kill me and I go to Heaven,
I will come down with the fear of the gods.

If your days are dark, I will laugh at you
If you hurt the one dearest to me, I will bring miserable years to your generation.

How's that for a criminal conversation?

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very dark piece which is unique.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Zoe

      Thank you so much.

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Wonderfully dark write here, this is the first I've read from you I think and it's a really strong and balanced piece.

    Great job!

    • 8 years ago

      by Zoe

      Thanks you so much. Glad you liked it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Zoe,

    I saw Sir Ben's comment ...and he's right...

    Nice dark poem .. actually it scared me lol...

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Zoe

      Lol thanks glad it scared you. I was aiming for it. Ha ha just kidding. Glad you liked it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Zoe,

    I love this dark write from you; it oozes strength, resilience and determination - the kind that would strike fear into any enemy!

    I will mind how I tread around you, lol.

    Take care and all the very best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Zoe

      Thanks I always try. Glad you liked it.

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