Pain

by Heather   Oct 8, 2016


Life is nothing without pain and sorrow can it be we cannot live without out it. So shall it be it stay with us so we know we still have a soul.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hi, welcome to P&Q.

    This is deep and I think we cannot live without pain because it does help us to deal with things in life.

    The only thing is you have written 'without out' I think the out is not needed.
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Heather

      Thank you. And ya your right the second out is not needed. Again thank you