Rebirth

by nancy   Oct 8, 2016


At that point i was blank
My mind stopped
The feeling of was all that hovered
I felt lonely
This life i felt like giving up
And determined was i....
I wanted to give up in the first attempt
The first trial.
But when the knife was in my hand my cell beeped......
A msg..............
A msg from my friend that said"Don't do anything stupid"
A msg that made me change my mind
The knife fell off my hand.
The msg made me cry out......COZ i knew then that someone was there...
But still i managed to reply"It seems no one cares"
Soon after came her reply where a line was as such"We are your friends we care for you"
Those lines brought a relief so great
A tiny moment of joy engulfed me
It gave me peace and when i went to bed that day i was asleep soon.
It was surprising coz for many days i could not sleep.
The harder had i tried to sleep greater the pain it brought along.
I woke up that evening
Another msg awaited me.from another friend.
It revealed my importance in that person's life.
Shouts and scoldings followed the day after from my friends.
But it was that first instance i felt lucky..
I felt that yes,there are people who
Cares for me
Wants me
Loves me
Adores me
Understands me
And who wants me to live my life happily
I'm glad to have such friends who cares for me
I'm really glad that after these stumbling rocks...
God has given the 3 most precious jewels.....my friends
They are my smile....my life i owe to them.
They are the one's because of whom i live today
I really feel sorry for those who are unable to enjoy that felling of having such wonderful friends who cares for them and loves them so much..............
And yes at last i want to thank my friends for choosing such a stupid and idiot girl like me as their friend............
Tolerating my stupidity and being besides me when i needed them the most and being my friend forever........
They have really justified the saying..........
"A Friend In Need Is A Friend Indeed"

[ P.S. i'm glad to have such wonderful friends and yah it's my real life incident and i am proud to have such friends]

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  • 7 years ago

    by Candice Anne Moretz

    Funny, how you decided to post something on self harm because of how mean life is. As far as I know, in reality you take pride in emotionally bending the minds of your friends. And how astounding it is to see you imagine your possession of guts to take that step; when in person you don't even have the courage to accept the truth and apologise!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ekta Jain

    It's an amazing and well written poetry.
    An perfectly eloquent poem.

    • 8 years ago

      by nancy

      Thanks ekta

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Priya,

    What a lovely poem and dedication this is.
    Having friends like this around you really can make all the difference and even change the very course of your life (which it seems to have done for you).
    Don't be too hard on yourself. It takes a certain decency to own up to our shortcomings and acknowledge those who put up with them. You have that quality and you are young.

    Well done on this,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by nancy

      Thanks Ben. I m happy that u lyked my poem.
      And yah my friends r just wonderful and I won't take and stupid steps in da future.
      And thanks once again.

      _ priya

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Thanks 4 ur comment.and taking out tym 4m ur busy schedule to read it..:)

  • 8 years ago

    by Sushmita Mitra Chetri

    A well versed piece.
    Good work and keep penning.

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