Comments : Ode to a Calet Maid.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Kate,

    This is a really sweet dedication. I've written a few of these and I always enjoy them. Putting pen to paper and thinking about them and the world you share is time well spent. Remember the special times always.

    Kate, it looks like you need to correct a few of the symbols that occur when pasting a poem onto the site.

    Well done,

    Michael x

    • 8 years ago

      by Kate Hicks

      Thanks Michael. I noticed several of those symbols and thought I'd got them all. Thanks for your Coments. X

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    this is beautiful but there's an error in some stanzas.
    please edit these stanzas for the readers...
    ---------->
    "Through thick and thin you tault� me
    The way a teacher should
    You showed me how to get stuff done
    The way that Edna would

    You were always very helpful
    Never snappy or unkind
    You (change this tault->taught) tault me to crack on with it
    and how to never mind

    The wrinkled duvets wonky towels
    And the pillows all askew
    You'd� say to me"
    � 'stop faffing now' and
    � 'C'mon Kate...that'll do! "

    will be back when it's edited.
    Goodluck

    • 8 years ago

      by Kate Hicks

      Hi, thanks for pointing this out. I went through it all this morning and corrected it all but it's still coming through messed up. Let's hope this final edit works.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Kate,

    This is lovely. A pleasure to read.

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Koan

    I enjoyed reading this poem very much...!!
    Thx

  • 8 years ago

    by Sarah

    Aw I love this poem! Thank you for sharing!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I loved this.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Aww. Very beautiful.