Wow, this poem is incredibly beautiful and well written. I loved the picture you painted and emotion you evoked from this piece. Although it's short, every single line was powerful and packed a punch. That's when you know you've truly written a good poem, when every line helps carry the piece along and evokes emotion, painting a vivid picture all the while.

5/5

Judging Comment

This little gem dazzled PnQ this week!
It was a joy to read and filled with such thought provoking imagery, I was amazed!

Its dark and eerie, and yet captured the true mystery of a poet, writing.. the thoughts and emotions can be felt.. this was wonderful!