Cloud of love (HM)

by Mr. Darcy   Oct 9, 2016


Cloud, cloud

Full of love, cloud cloud,

Just for you... here's my heart like a cloud... full love,

floating true. Drifting high, in the sky, I feel alive, on cloud nine:
The wind then changed and rearranged this phase...
BOOM,--FLASH, -- CRACKLE
THUNDER,--& LIGHTENING ,--STRUCK
MY..BLIND..HEART

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T e a r s.. f a l l.. l i k e.. b l o o d

f r o m.. r u p t u r i n g.. e y e s............

///////////////////////////////////////..............

l a s h i n g thousands of p i n s ......................

s l a s h i n g.. a l l.. w i t h i n.....................................

///////////////////////////////////////......................................

Love hemorrhages

from my capsized heart

...........................as I find you with him

...............................................and like a storm he steals

.....................my cloud of love....................................... away

michael
2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    My friend they say that there is a fine line between crazy and genius and this poem at Fist glance is walking that Line....I have to say the more times I read it the more I can honestly say that it is genius....really I'm even having trouble commenting. Amazing write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Lol Ben. Seriously, I'm a crazy S.O.B!!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Trish

    I really can't say how this inspired me. I've never read anything like it, amazing.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thank you Trish. If I inspire you, I am a happy man. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A dramatic soul wrenching piece. Starting off so lovely and fluffy and then crashing to blood splattering lows. Very visual and pulls at the emotions. A great write. Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ouch. Better to have one's feet on the ground, right?

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Yup, less chance of landing hard.

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Mr Darcy.. ýou just made me moist.. my eyes i mean.. you bought tears to my eyes with this beautiful piece.. such good imagry.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Moist, eh? Not bad at my age!! Lol

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