by Mr. Darcy
Mad! The maddening thing is I relate to your 'mad' |
by Everlasting
Madness,indeed! |
by ether
Okay so I wouldn't normally say this as a compliment - but this did not flow at all haha. But in the best way, because I had to concentrate so hard on the repetitious repeats of repetitive themes. This piece grabbed me and pulled me in and also perplexed me, which I'm sure is your goal here. Well executed, and very clever. |
by Everlasting
Thank you Ether. |
by Meena Krish
You lost me some where along the lines and this repeating oneself they say is good for you are reminding yourself but at the same time it can be annoying too! :) All in all your poems are always interesting to read! |
by Everlasting
Thank you Meena |