Me to You (8 syllables Thai form )

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Oct 12, 2016


I'm emotionally attached
Then I decided to detach
You made me feel that I am whole,
Now longing for you like a fool.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    This form is new to me. Apart from the syllable criteria, are there any others?

    I like the poem, a love poem about being love sick, waiting to be with your lover.

    Well done,

    Michael x

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Sir Michael,

      This Thai form 8 syllabus is also new to me .. T'was introduced to me by my sister. she's an author also but more on short stories and theater play on a different site.. she asked me to do it, then I give it a shot.

      Thanks for your kind words sir,

      Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really enjoyed this, not familiar with the style but an enjoyable read. Its always sad when your in a bad relationship but its a sign of a strong person who once they realise its not working is able to detach themselves. Too many people stay in relationships that don't work rather than let it go. Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, I really like this a lot, neat style. I have been in that type of relationship, they suck. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by ether

    Ah, the perils of love. Well highlighted in this unique style that I have never seen before. Thank you for teaching me this Thai style!

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Ether,

      thank you for reading this. yah you must give it a shot ..There are many kinds/ type of poetry. .There are 50 if I'm not mistaken. The short types are my favourite. .

      Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thank you Em for reading this

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