Instruments Inside Me

by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist   Oct 15, 2016


=Drums=

Every time you sent some messages
The beating of my heart sounds like this,

Boom boom tug
Boom boom tug

Drumming inside my stomach
Leaving my ears red hot.

=Guitar=
Strumming and plucking in every thread of my veins
From my toes up to my brains.

We're worlds apart
That's what we are

I'm located at the first fret
And you are at the guitar's neck.

=Piano=

Like the black and white piano keys,
Inside me, you are the harmony.

You can play all your songs
I don't mind if it's wrong.

Even if you step on me like a pedal
I will put you on the pedestal.
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Lately, I've been trying,
To pull back my heart once again.

Because no one playing the drums, guitar, and piano lately
No boom boom tug, no strumming and most of all no more harmony.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Oh, Wow. You are a talanted girl. You can write poems, you can play drums and piano and also guitar. I like to know these facts about you.

    How about singing?

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Im a church Choir before..1st soprano....I love singing but singing don't love me back hahaha lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hi

    =Drums=

    Every time you sent some messages
    The beating of my heart sounds like this,

    This is very fine description. Messages from a lover really makes the heart fly. This is very fantastic write because you have worked on two different things: Love and Instruments.

    Full marks for you have arranged the feelings of love on these instruments very incredibly.
    Like reading this one. Good luck.

    But I don't know any musical instruments to play.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Augustus,

      I know how to play drums a lil bit and piano a Lil bit also..
      I love playing guitar but I'm not a pro.

      thanks for the remarks :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Gel this is an excellent, unique piece of poetry. I liked the melodious theme to it, all the instruments you put into it also.

    Well done on such s creative write.
    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An excellent and unique piece. I love the way you have integrated the different instruments into a love poem. Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent and original work, Gel. I love the idea of you being 'the first fret' and them being at 'the guitars neck'. A really unique idea.

    Well done on this,

    Ben

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