Excellent and original work, Gel. I love the idea of you being 'the first fret' and them being at 'the guitars neck'. A really unique idea.

Well done on this,

Ben

An excellent and unique piece. I love the way you have integrated the different instruments into a love poem. Milly x

Gel this is an excellent, unique piece of poetry. I liked the melodious theme to it, all the instruments you put into it also.

Well done on such s creative write.
Em

Hi

=Drums=

Every time you sent some messages
The beating of my heart sounds like this,

This is very fine description. Messages from a lover really makes the heart fly. This is very fantastic write because you have worked on two different things: Love and Instruments.

Full marks for you have arranged the feelings of love on these instruments very incredibly.
Like reading this one. Good luck.

But I don't know any musical instruments to play.

Oh, Wow. You are a talanted girl. You can write poems, you can play drums and piano and also guitar. I like to know these facts about you.

How about singing?