Rain Again (Acrostic) (HM)

by Mr. Darcy   Oct 16, 2016


Rivulets cascade
Against this cave,
Interrupting my
Numbing, blissful haze...

Against my walls a
Growing tide, drowning
All the lies inside;
In the stinking pit I rot...
Nailed from the bloody cot.

michael
2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Michael,

    is this a repost? ... it's raining inside you and you're dripping. ..hahaha joke. ... Nice double acrostic...

    Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Thanks Milly. It's just what sprang to mind as I watched and listened to the rainstorm. X

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent. Loved the rhyme and the gentle start progressing rapidly into gore lol Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wonderful acrostic-very dark subject.
    Depression feels a lot like it's raining a watershed in your head. Drowning would be a respite. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I think it made it much better and smoother to read but I am biased lol good for a 'quickie.' *dirty laugh* :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      *laughs like Sid James*

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