I voted and came back to comment.. |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks Naomi, I'm always doing that. |
Hi there well done double acrostic. . |
by Em
Michael, this is wonderful acrostic and well written when the rain hits its hard to get out isn't it? |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks Em. I decided to add rhyme to this acrostic, what do you think. |
by Em
I think it made it much better and smoother to read but I am biased lol good for a 'quickie.' *dirty laugh* :) |
by Mr. Darcy
*laughs like Sid James* |
by Brenda
Michael, wonderful acrostic-very dark subject. |
Excellent. Loved the rhyme and the gentle start progressing rapidly into gore lol Milly x |
by Mr. Darcy
Thanks Milly. It's just what sprang to mind as I watched and listened to the rainstorm. X |
Sir Michael, |