Comments : Rain Again (Acrostic) (HM)

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I voted and came back to comment..

    However I forgot what I was going to say!

    So, well done on such a sad piece mr darcy

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks Naomi, I'm always doing that.

      It's just a quickie *snorts* that I wrote as the rain hammered down against my bedroom window

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi there well done double acrostic. .

    Excellent

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Michael, this is wonderful acrostic and well written when the rain hits its hard to get out isn't it?
    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Thanks Em. I decided to add rhyme to this acrostic, what do you think.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I think it made it much better and smoother to read but I am biased lol good for a 'quickie.' *dirty laugh* :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      *laughs like Sid James*

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, wonderful acrostic-very dark subject.
    Depression feels a lot like it's raining a watershed in your head. Drowning would be a respite. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent. Loved the rhyme and the gentle start progressing rapidly into gore lol Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Thanks Milly. It's just what sprang to mind as I watched and listened to the rainstorm. X

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Michael,

    is this a repost? ... it's raining inside you and you're dripping. ..hahaha joke. ... Nice double acrostic...

    Gel