Comments : In Your Eyes

  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    I like the way you numbered the stanzas. It looks organised and classy.

    They say eyes are the windows to the soul. Here your lovers eyes contain a crazy strength, enough to keep love stable and all enduring.

    Well done and stay strong.

    Michael x

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thank you, Sir Michael. ..

      I like your msg at the bottom. ..It serves as an eye opener for me.....

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Brenda

    Gel, such a beautiful love tribute to your special love. I love the layout and each stanza is so special. This person gives you great strength and it's important to have when you are fighting through things-well done-

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Eyes definitely speak volumes.
    Loved this

  • 9 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Gel, Gel, Gel, Gel, Gel!
    This is as Mr Darcy pointed out, a classy poem.
    I also like how you have numbered the stanzas.

    The rhyming and imagery, spot on! The only thing I could see is the first stanza doesn't really rhyme as the rest does, but to me it didn't matter, the flow was still there!
    I also love the little note at the bottom! :)
    You had me hooked to this piece the second I laid my eyes on it (get it - haha!)

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Naomi. ..bout the numbered stanza I always do that even when I was in high school. ...but when I entered to the site I minimised the Number thing coz some here use (* , ~0~ etc. ) so I adopt the culture. ..lol

      Gel

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Gel,

    I never knew you felt this way. I suppose I have often been complimented on my piecing and intoxicating eyes...

    No, seriously, a wonderful piece - well done.

    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    ^^^^^

    He does have beautiful eyes lol

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I really, really, really enjoyed this piece.

    I do love to read such powerful emotions and within a love poem, the reader needs to be able to feel the words.

    I admire poets who can pour their love onto paper with elegance and true heart! Beautiful!

    PS: Ben's eyes are lovely :-)

    • 9 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Wahahha. ..I didn't see Sir Ben. ...maybe he has a pair of beautiful eyes. ..but it's not him I was talking about....This was written 2006

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Not me? I'm devastated, Gel! lol

  • 9 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Lol Sir Ben I didn't know that you are a comedian. ..

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    I wonder what lead you to create this kind of wonderful love poems. You always install the feelings of paradise in your romantic poems which I very adore to read. Your poems are like the blended songs (Birds Songs) coming out from the loving female bird. Wow... this is very magical and valuable write. I find the act of true love and a deep explanation of love.

    Nice write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Augustus,

      Thanks for the wonderful comment...D*mn! you're good in praising... my future brother-in-law ....hahahaha lol just kidding...

      GBY

      Gel

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha! Ha!... oh, that was a very good joke... Ha ha ha ha!!... oh... you are so good in joking too. I can't stop laughing right now.

    Shakura and Sasuke.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahaha. ..well I'm a stand up comedian that's why. ..and sometimes a clown. .lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Jenn

    All this short Loem poems are wonderful!
    I love 4.

    Well written!
    Jenn