War (acrostic)

by Phil   Oct 18, 2016


Wives and children are left behind
As the bravest of boys change into men,
Returning with injuries or in their tombs.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wow.nice little piece. ..and the wording really reflects war....Well done

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil

      Thank you both

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    As Em says, a hard hitting piece:

    Wars

    When
    Armed conflict
    Ruins lives
    Somethings terribly wrong.

  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Phil what a beautiful little piece. It will hurt some to read it, as it is the truth, and well truth hurts..
    war is a terrible thing but its apart of our daily life.
    Well done on this write Phil.

    • 8 years ago

      by Phil

      Thank you ladies.

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Phil, wonderful acrostic with a powerful message. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow, what a hard hitting piece full of truths and images that will stay with us until our troops come home and our wars end completely.

    Great, eye opening write.
    Em

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