Until

by Krystal Davis   Oct 19, 2016


It was once upon a time
From the moment we locked eyes
Until it wasn't anymore
And it was her company you wanted more.
It was perfect-this unspoken bond we shared
Until it wasn't any longer
And I questioned if you even cared.
It had all the makings of a happy ever after
Until it became never ever
Never happy after
Happy never
It became simply
After.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    What a stunning, unique piece of poetry.
    I have found myself saying this alot lately but love can make or break us.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Very nice, I loved the way it flowed and the context was spot on. Well done-

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Krystal and congratulations on an original first post from you.
    It almost reads as a rather clever little tongue twister. I like the way the lines become shorter and shorter, climaxing in an abrupt and brutal end!

    well done,

    Ben

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