by Ben Pickard
Larry, |
by Naughtymouse
Larry, as always and not to regurgitate old comments, you write so damn good it makes me sick. Not content with an amazing word choice and atmosphere you go and throw it into a Quatern, which is possibly my favourite of all formed poetry, I've written a few so I know how central that recurring line is and yours is perfect. |
Ben (both of you), thank you. Taking ether's challenge, this is rewritten from a poem I wrote in 1998 & I appreciate your compliments. The choice of a Quatern was dictated by my desire to reuse the line, rather than the other way around. |
by Em
I can't add much more than what the 2 Bens wrote.... |
Beautifully written sad but dynamic Millyx |
by Maple Tree
Judging Comment |
Thank you, Andrea |