Gel though this is short its really powerful and I guess we can all relate to it because we have all no doubt be in lust then got let go not knowing where we will fall after being dropped or even if we will get back up.

I have a few suggestions if you don't mind:

I'm like a stone after putting me on a slingshot
Pull me closer and then release....

Now I do not know where I would fall

That's All!
^^
Copy if you like, it would read like that.

All the best and remember just suggestions.
Em

Gel,

What a charming and amusing write. I love the abrupt ending!

Take care,

Ben

Hello!

I like this write and the fact that is hidden within these three lines. It's very jolly write and will please many. Girls doesn't deserve to be release, but to be get protected with holy hands.

Nice write.

Ya! Thank you very much. Double meaning creativity was awesome. Nicely stated.