Do You See What The Problem Is?

by Everlasting   Oct 21, 2016


Do you see that peach on that tree?
The one that hangs so tightly free?

The winds come and graze his skin
The Tree nourishes him from within.

The sun illuminates him throughly.
The birds salivate for his body .

Do you see...?

I want to be like him

Just hanging faithfully in there
for what may come one day

till I mature

( be ripen off by time )

then fall off that Tree

and be eaten
or become

dirt

Do you see?

Written by: L.L.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful write Milly x

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Ahhhh ... I love this poem...that's what happen , people come and go but what important is you share your part to the world...Strive even it's hard, coz when time comes we will never have any regret of doing something that we must..

    love this...

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Em, Darcy and Golden Angel

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Enjoy life while you can, or else you'll find yourself with the worms.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Fantastic

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