Ye Olde Rap

by Maher   Oct 21, 2016


Blessed be the dew
on this cold graveyard ground,
as the wind plays it's tune
through willows, well-wound.
Washed down by the wishes
of the whisperless dead,
weighted with worry
whilst we water and wed.
Shine down, through this town,
rays of light upon demons.
Execute to render moot
the casters and heathens.
No better time to lie high
upon the grasses and gardens,
the hilltops, the straw mats
and the daughters they pardoned.

Draw well from your well
my sweet child in arms.
Sit not back, nor believe
in their voices and charms.
"On the stake will she burn?
count me one of the crowd!"
Lift your glass to the sound
of her innocence - proud.
Shall we not venture down
through an ominous forest;
picture one of us lost,
a cost of fearing the honest.
Has it never beckoned you
in the way we were threatened?
Left dependent on penance
through these laws and amendments.

These corrupted intentions:

"Can thou even hear us now?
Hast thee lost thy direction?
You're a drifter like the clouds,
have you no recollection?
Shun us not to the wolves
of your own vexed invention;
I pray thine eloquent stutter
bares you naught but deception!
'Tis a chilling inception!
Is this not all a laugh?
How thou takest what's ours
and blame faith for your farce?
Hast thou not even a soul,
nor a shred of one hidden
within that blackened mass of yours
betwixt the breast you were given?"

Find you not this funny?
I thought you would laugh!
Is this not what we do
in this fine place of ours?
Nestled neatly in robes
laced with silver brocade,
watching willingly on
whilst the plebeians fade.

Take no offense dear soul,
but by God, take heed!
Lest your dark-lit desires
douse your every good deed.

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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Maher! Another piece from you!! Very good! I hope i get to hear it soon?! I was bopping along.. loving the imagery! Well done

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol ty USB. I'm no good with rapping, so probably won't be hearing this one :p

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent. Really loved the visuals Milly x

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    I've really missed reading your poetry...partly due to the fact that you haven't posted in a while and also because I've been overseas for a bit. Anyway...glad to rectify this today :)

    As always...you just seem to capture this reader with your wording...it's so very elegant in an olde worlde way..which I love when it's written properly...

    of course I have a couple of suggestions *cough*

    "Can thou even hear us now?
    Hast thou lost thy direction?

    the two 'thou's ' are on top of each other and I found that distracting somewhat so..maybe try to change one of them?

    plebians..should that be plebeians?

    Regardless...this poem reminded me of certain feelings I had when I held a mass in the catholic church when my mum passed away (her wishes which I honoured but did not agree with). It was dark..hard hitting and, as usual...pretty awesome :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Lol thank you Hellon, I'm glad you enjoyed it and as always, I love your feedback :)

      "Can thou even hear us now?
      Hast thee lost thy direction?"

      You're right about the two "thous"s. That sound better?

      You're also right about plebeians - fixed it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Maher,

    I really, really adore this poem!

    "whilst we water and wed"

    excellent line!!

    Your visual display and word usage was fun, vibrant and just wonderful to the eye of the reader!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Andrea, glad you like it :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Maher! This is amazing! Your visuals were spot on and kept me engaged all the way through. Just beautiful! Well done-

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, glad you enjoyed it :)

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