Comments : Zugswang

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    This is excellent! What a unique idea and how well executed.

    I will not do the "desperado"
    let me just do the "Fianchetto"

    ^^

    This made me laugh.

    Well done,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahaha. I tried not to get emotionally attached , but still, it showed up....

      anyway thank you

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    this is super. A cleverly thought out poem, using a game requiring the same.

    Well done,

    Michael x

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hahaha yes Sir Michael thanks. .This is a game and another game. ...using the game terminology. .

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Gel, I really enjoyed this piece and read it a couple of times. Each time it brought something new and refreshing.

    Your game is now unrated...
    touch move , wrong move
    Checkmate!
    ^^
    Loved this.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Em,

      Thanks. ...This is the game I would never accept defeat. ...Only in games. ...lol

  • 8 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    I'm not really that into the game of chess but I'd like to look at this poem as something that is far from the game of chess. The game of life. It's a real battle but if you're strong enough to push yourself to go further, there's always the chance of winning.
    Great job Gee, as always.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Hi Dib,

      1st -thanks for the comment
      2nd- yah it's about life, I'm the master of my own and I will not or will never Quit(resign), even this life get too tough I will not choose to move desperately,I preferred (Fianchetto) a long move but sure...

      It's always a matter of choice.

      3rd- thanks for calling me Gee... only close friends use to call me that name

  • 8 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    Hi Gel.

    First of all best of luck for the Contest.

    Very nice crafted work using the chess format. I got the feeling from this write is that you trying to explain, we should always take correct steps in our life, thinking every situation and should walk sans any fear confidently.

    Yes, and the last segment is making it more classical.

    All the best.

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Yes you're certainly right there brother it's about life ...that brain works well....
      Btw Augustus thanks for the goodluck msg. ..

      Have a nice day

      Gel