Comments : Bandaids Of Tears:

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Scott, this is so simple yet so sad and telling of heart ache. You describe it well.
    The words nd rhyme are all great and when read aloud is perfect.

    Bandaids of tears
    Cover up my pain,
    For an injured heart
    Is hard to maintain.
    ^^
    Loved this.
    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Shelley Williams

    Wonderful job with the rhyme of your poem. I like your poetry style.