Indeed this is soothing. I hadn't heard of this form before but I like it (maybe that's because you did it and I'm biased about your work)
Your word usage is spot on and you say a whole lot within such a limit.
All the best, Em

Wonderful work, Michael and the imagery - as ever - is simply marvellous. I hope this is nominated; I'm out already!

All the very best, good man,

Ben

Just beautiful Michael, really neat format. You never cease to amaze me with your poetry.

Michael,

I cannot believe that I missed this poem!!!!

It is rare that I miss ANY love poems on pnq!!

I REALLY love this Michael, especially the format, it allows the reader to absorb every single word and their meaning which in love poetry is essential and there is no way anyone could read this and not immediately be absorbed straight away and this form (which I am completely new to) really resonates and magnifies your words.

Talking of which - your word choice is perfect, i mean really perfect - if i weren't a taken man my friend ...hahaha

I've added this to my favourites and genuinely this is one of my favourite pieces of love poetry on pnq i wish i could nominate this.

Awesomeness personified.

Earthman