Good poem but in the 6th stanza 2nd line i think u should put was instead of were... Just and idea. Other than that i think this is a great write! Keep it up!

wow...brilliant!!

wow, great poem, it all came together so nicely

Exellent job on ur poem! Shows true feelings I like that. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

I like this, but to be honest it was nothing special... but I can see that you are talented...
Xox Sherrie

wow awesome poem i loved it. yes u r very talent and i liked the style to it. Keep it up.

Wow! I really liked this poem ALOT! Keep up the great work! 5!

i loved the poem. it was full of truth. i can relate to the poem aswell. keep writing. xxx

awwwwwwwww.... that was so cute!! its so adorable and ur rhyme made it even better!!.. the flow was wonderful.. i love ur last stanza..
keep writin hun
thnx 4 da comment
nouna

wow good poem...no no awesome poem..lol...no one is perfect though lol but yes i know what you mean...hehe...anyways 5/5 good job..luv yas mwah...plz comment on my poems!!!

-kayla-

oh lord this describes the way my friends say i think perfectly
5/5

i really like this poem. i like your use of repitition and the way it flows so well. great job. keep it up
crystal

I am so glad now, you are back to keep writing, you are a very talented poet,
amazing job 5/5

I LOVED this poem. its so great. i think it's important for readers to be able to relate to your poems, and this one definantly got to me : ) great job.