Larry this is magical but so very sad. What a telling tale of a young, suicidal boy.
I guess when we see things like this they stick with us throughout life.

Em

Oh what a sad story. .but nice and neat words injected to it..

5/5
Gel

Larry, such a sad write but I love how you wove the scientist side and human side together and reminding us of how frail our lives are. No matter how analytical we try to be knowing what happened right at that spot reminds us that we couldn't and shouldn't shut off our feelings. Well done-

Larry parts of this especially the first stanza reminded me of the park where I used to walk my dog. I liked the feel of this and the contrasting view points Milly x