Comments : Altar Boy Grown Up (syntuit)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderful write, Larry, that I suppose could straddle the senryu/syntuit forms except (from my understanding) your use of the word 'I' which isn't typical of the former.

    "Bee trapped in amber" - brilliant.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Larry Chamberlin

      I think it must be a syntuit because it describes reflection rather than makes an observation

      Thanks, Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Larry, what can I say other than you write this form so perfectly. You say so much in so few lines and though it is short it is well thought out and executed beautifully.
    All the best,
    Em