Comments : Leaving me forever

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A sad piece, Heather. Perhaps the fact that he is gone when you open your eyes is for the best in the long run if the first two lines are anything to go by.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Heather, this may be a short, sad tale but it speaks in volume, emotion and unfortunate relatability. As Ben says though it is probably for the best because no one deserves to be forgotten in any way especially in any kind of relationships so here's hoping those dreams of this pig fade.

    Take care, Em