Stinky Boys (Acrostic)

by Brenda   Oct 26, 2016


So no matter how much nurturing your mama gave you,
there are certain men,
I think never learn
not to be a dog when it comes to woman.
Kindness goes a long way,
yet don't confuse our kindness with gullibility.
Because when you mess with
others so carelessly,
you might just get what's coming to you.
See if I'm kidding....

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  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    Ooo, Brenda! Sounds like someone's about to get one hell of a rude awakening (lol)...but on a serious note -I've met this kind of crappy deal more than I'd ever care to >_> Certain boys...with certain behaviors, well - lets just say it IS disheartening and it's repulsive and I couldn't agree more. :/ I enjoyed your feisty twist on this though, I really did! ^_^
    I agree with Denise, not all of them get what they deserve...but, *grinning* you go on and make sure that THIS one does >:)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Mayday, thank you so much! Oh for sure, he got his, lol. Some boys can be so stinky and others sweet as pie. I think the stinky ones should learn what happens when they are like what are, it's not good. Thank you again!

  • 8 years ago

    by Denise Jefferson

    Brenda, This was very good, sometimes they do get what they deserve, sometimes they don't. I had a good laugh

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Denise, thank you! Yes, sometimes they do, lol.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hugs dear Brenda :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Hugs back at ya Em!

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Brenda the title pulled me to look at this and thought it is about the stinky boys dripping with sweat ..haha haha

    By the way nice acrostic poem...and the message well executed. ..

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks ever so much Gel!

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good heavens, woman - I'm staying clear of you, lol

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lol, just saying...

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