Comments : Stinky Boys (Acrostic)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello, Brenda

    Acrostic poems are one of my favourites. Your title certainly lured me to read on. What could she mean? Could this be a poem about a family of skunks? Hmm, I thought...

    No, not a poem about skunks, instead a deeper poem exploring that old argument, nature vs nurture. Why when you bring your 'boys' up well do they act so awfully, and especially to women. This poem delivers a harsh warning too. Don't mess with a woman scorned. I learned that lesson many years ago.

    Well done, Brenda

    Take care,

    Michael x

    P.s I would still like to see the same acrostic about skunks. Go on, give it a whirl. :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Brenda. Wonderfully executed poem with a great message. Kindness isn't gullible and all too often there will be those stinky boys who think they're real men when infact they are not and those kinds of boys do not respect any women unfortunately even if married.

    Love this and thanks for making me smile again, Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The title alone made me laugh, Brenda - even more so when I could see that it wasn't literal but an indication to their behaviour towards women!
    And the end - Brenda! There's positive venom in that last line, lol.

    Great write and all the best,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thanks all! I really appreciate your comments. I'm very protective of my friends and when some mangy married cur is trying to get with one of them and hurting her in the process, well it raises my hackles. I don't know about the United Kingdom, but in the states if you have a male dog that wants to roam he gets neutered, just saying...Michael, I like the idea of the skunks....

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Good heavens, woman - I'm staying clear of you, lol

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Lol, just saying...

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Brenda the title pulled me to look at this and thought it is about the stinky boys dripping with sweat ..haha haha

    By the way nice acrostic poem...and the message well executed. ..

    Gel

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thanks ever so much Gel!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Hugs dear Brenda :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Hugs back at ya Em!

  • 8 years ago

    by Denise Jefferson

    Brenda, This was very good, sometimes they do get what they deserve, sometimes they don't. I had a good laugh

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Denise, thank you! Yes, sometimes they do, lol.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    Ooo, Brenda! Sounds like someone's about to get one hell of a rude awakening (lol)...but on a serious note -I've met this kind of crappy deal more than I'd ever care to >_> Certain boys...with certain behaviors, well - lets just say it IS disheartening and it's repulsive and I couldn't agree more. :/ I enjoyed your feisty twist on this though, I really did! ^_^
    I agree with Denise, not all of them get what they deserve...but, *grinning* you go on and make sure that THIS one does >:)

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Mayday, thank you so much! Oh for sure, he got his, lol. Some boys can be so stinky and others sweet as pie. I think the stinky ones should learn what happens when they are like what are, it's not good. Thank you again!