Comments : Come on!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I like the separate stanzas and the refrain.

    Good work.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Ekta, I like the repetition of "come on, come on" It's like a dare to all who read this...

    1: Yes we should all forget about the past because what's done is done but it also makes us who we are today.

    2: I feel life is what we make it.

    3: We are all unique which is what makes us extra special but it would be even more special if we all got on.

    4: We can all take heed from this and stop wasting time. Time truly is precious and waits for no one.

    5: Very wise words none of us know when we will be gone from here so should live life to the fullest.

    6: None of us should have regrets other than things we have wanted to so but didn't get around to them.

    7: Most definitely we should try things out of our comfort zone because we never know we might like them

    8: Smiles are very contagious and go a long way.

    Fantastic advice. Em