You Are My Flesh and I Am Your Bone

Hello Gel,

I absolutely love the title. It is so graphic, so passionate.

A nicely structured poem speaking of a love that is not (hopefully) not constrained to the human existence, but for the ever after.

Well done and take care,

Michael x

You are my flesh and Iam your bone
And for you I was born
I love these words they are beautifully written, makes you kind of teary eyes.
Yes indeed these words have been spoken by a lot of people and if they haven't someone needs to hear them

Gel what a beautiful love piece although with a sad tinge to it. Unrequited love, possibly?

I felt sorry every time they hurt you
I knew it all coz I can feel it too.
You are my flesh and I am your bone
And for you, I was born.
^^
A powerful opening. It is hard to watch from a far and see the person you live hurting by others and feel it too because of how much you care for them.

Even this lifetime is not meant for us
I hope we'll meet again someday, somewhere
To God above I could ask
To another lifetime, I'll take you as my pair.
^^
I think in the first line 'if' is missing between even and this.

I am now a prisoner because of this love
Sitting by my window, waiting for wishing star
I'll wish I'm with you and no problem at all
And no one could ever depart us anymore.
^^
Great visuals here of a woman waiting for her love to be returned by the man she loves from afar.
All in all, fabulous write.
Em