Comments : Five Lines Drawn From The Deep (Day 1)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Very sound words of advice. Here's a suggestion:

    Do not regret things
    That have not yet come
    Regret the things
    That you haven't done
    Or that you were too blind
    To see the value of.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Thanks, Em...I know your point ..but my decision is final...looooong sigh........ :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Gel,

    I like this format - five lines of deep thought.

    I mean what is the point of regretting what has not come to pass? Better that we concentrate on the moment we live in; trying to be all we can be now, then if we accumulate all this effort, the future will take care of its self.

    As for the past, well that's history, and there ain't no changing that, not unless you have a Tardis!? lol

    Well done, I would love to see more of these. Five lines of contemplative poetry.

    Take care,

    Michael x

    • 8 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Sir Michael,

      thanks again and again and again. ... This is like a quote like poetry 5 lines 5 syllables Originally presented by yours truly Gelyn G. R.

      :)