Comments : Don't Give Up

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gabriel,

    What a truly inspirational write, all delivered with great rhyme.
    I have always said 'whatever comes at you in life, face on your feet' and the sentiments in this poem reaffirm those feelings nicely.

    A great write,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Thanks glad you enjoyed it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Truly inspirational.

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    A very inspiring write with really good rhyming throughout. Something we all should read to be a be able to stand another day.

    • 8 years ago

      by Gabriel

      I'm glad you enjoyed it, at the time, I was thinking of writing something that would melt away all of the negative thinking and excuses I give myself everyday and to get rid of the claustrophobic tunnel vision I have sometimes; you know, the I'm alone depressed and my life is meaningless, and I'm always in a dark murky abyss while the light shines on the other side of the tunnel wherever I am not.
      Ya those thoughts always seem to take hold when I don't have anything to occupy my time. When it's all up to me to keep myself feeling happy, when I am in that situation those thoughts usually get the best of me but not this time!

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A beautifully written inspiring piece!

    • 7 years ago

      by Gabriel

      Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it.