Comments : O God

  • 8 years ago

    by Cold Kira

    In every words, I feel the realization of life where thousands or millions of people point their middle finger to pull you down. The pain demand its character to life. What a beautiful poem you made. I hope to read more from you :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Thank you very much from the bottom of my heart. I always write sad poems. Thank you very much for your reply my friend, Cold Kira.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Mahesh, I can feel how much pain you have had within your life throughout this poem and all I want to say is that you (well all of us) need to remember that it is a bad day, month or even year but not a bad life even though there are people within life that thrive on pulling us down daily. I have been there and believe me to find the strength to pull ourselves back from that dark hole is hard but you will do it.

    All the best, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Thank you mam for your kindly reply. I am too much sad in my life.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I can always listen. Have a lovely day

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Yes there are people to pull you down and there are those who like to make our lives miserable; but its up to us whether we are going to accept it and be dragged or throw it aside and see the light. Once you let yourself into that dark hole its hard to come out and if you know you have not done anything wrong then ignore, disregard the others...take care.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mahesh Kachare

      Thank you very much for your great reply Meena mam. Some of like you support me to survive this sorrowful and restless life. My heart totally is totally broken.

  • 8 years ago

    by Denise Jefferson

    Mahesa. All I can say is oh my God, I often wonder why is it that some people can't see that just because today is bringing trials, tomorrow maybe different. Your life may look sorrowful to you but there is someone out there who treasure that life

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Death is never the best option. When the sun sets, the moon rises. If you can, please read my _HEROES. Things go wrong to turn good at last. There's always one out there, who cares.

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I can see that you have thus considered yourself a writer of pessimism... Is there any way that would change? The world is certainly a better place to live than to leave. Smile!