Life sans you

by Augustus Black   Oct 29, 2016


Sans you,
I sense as if I'm sinking profound;
Lacking of oxygen, dim vision, losing myself.
All I want is your vital hand to pull me
out of this humongous scary ocean.
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Date - 29th October 2016

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  • 8 years ago

    by Everywoman

    A human connection. A helping hand. We all crave to give and receive. Love how you have captured this universal need :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Augustus,

    When we feel like this, it is often love that can save us.

    Well written indeed,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Augustas, this is beautiful.
    I must admit I had to look up sans as I had never heard it before but its good to widen our horizons in love, life and vocab lol

    All the best, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by Augustus Black

      Yes, em. The word 'Sans' has made me little popular. Sans means - without

  • 8 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Are you pertaining to nessy again? hahaha joke. . This is a sweet poem for your crush. .. you are drowning too? you don't know how to swim? well I went there. ..lol it's so hard if someone keeping you drowning...drowning with love hahahhahha

    Nice piece Bro

    Gel

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