by Yakari Gabriel Oct 31, 2016
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
'And how do you cope |
Great job |
by Em
Another great piece worthy of front page, congratulations. |
This is a piece packed with emotions...I can feel the sadness lapping on every lines. Listen to MKKK sort of advice... |
by Em
Yakari, this is an absolute little gem. I can feel the loneliness, the emotions and the longing within this piece. It seems you have put your heart on plate and it's been left out to rot, go sour or whatever it will do because you are away from people you love and I know it hurts... I live near my family but sometimes that loneliness' is there and it feels as though I am alone in the world and tbh we are, we have our responsibilities but it's nice to have loved ones around to help us is times of hardship's and when that isn't possible it hurts. (Sorry rambling lol) |
You are the absolute sweetest. |
Aww. This is sweet. I can feel your longing in this piece. Being away from home and everyone you love is a hard thing to cope up with, but we must always look at a much better future and be hopeful that better days are ahead of you. |