Aww. This is sweet. I can feel your longing in this piece. Being away from home and everyone you love is a hard thing to cope up with, but we must always look at a much better future and be hopeful that better days are ahead of you.

--- MKKK

Yakari, this is an absolute little gem. I can feel the loneliness, the emotions and the longing within this piece. It seems you have put your heart on plate and it's been left out to rot, go sour or whatever it will do because you are away from people you love and I know it hurts... I live near my family but sometimes that loneliness' is there and it feels as though I am alone in the world and tbh we are, we have our responsibilities but it's nice to have loved ones around to help us is times of hardship's and when that isn't possible it hurts. (Sorry rambling lol)

1: We find a way to cope because we have too but sometimes it is difficult and hard to comprehend the feeling of loneliness, the home sickness ans every other emotion that comes like anger because you took on responsibilities and realisation that you are no longer under the wings of people you love, you are doing this for you.

2: Yes, we find hobbies to pass the time but in reality do these really help release all the pent up anger and other emotions that are floating around inside? No they subside them for a little bit don't completely disappear.

A fabulous, honest write.

Em

This is a piece packed with emotions...I can feel the sadness lapping on every lines. Listen to MKKK sort of advice...

Hugs

Gel

Another great piece worthy of front page, congratulations.

Great job