Inferno ( senryu )

by Everlasting   Nov 1, 2016


Life is an ice cube
floating in this glass of Earth
trying to cool it

L.L.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I absolutely love this. Life can be so difficult and hard at times bur I guess it makes us stronger and one day we will crack it..

    Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Excellent senryu, Lucero, with your own, inescapable originality interwoven.

    I hope you are well,

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thanks, so long as there's still some positivity in there, I'm pretty much okay.

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