Comments : How

  • 8 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Hmmmmmmm
    Nice poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    I see that this is and old poem but it seems a particularly poignant one to post at this time...

    Anyway, well written.

    *'your' in the first line should be 'you're' - it's a contraction (shortening) of 'you are'

    Take care