Sleeping beasties (acrostic)

by Brenda   Nov 3, 2016


Shhh, tread lightly...
Lest you are particularly
eager to have those memories
escape from the vast wasteland you have
placed them ever so carefully
in. Opening up that can of worms can come to
no good!
Go on now, walk away from this space in your mind...
-
But you counter, what's the harm?
Easing these memories out
at least will give you a chance to air out your thoughts,
straighten out in your head,
those awful things that have happened to you.
I just know you really should wake this beast!
Except I can't, I won't! You can't make me...
Sleeping beasties are best left alone.

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  • 8 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent write about facing ones demons. Well done Brenda!

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you-sometimes we have to poke at that bear other times, leave it be.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mayday

    *Gasp!*
    @_@ This is SO impressive! It seems well-thought out, and creatively put and I just love this! ^_^

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Wow, thank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words.

  • 8 years ago

    by Shruti

    This is amazing...and mysterious! I love the way you began. The dark thoughts, moments...memories that we all come across are some things that cannot really be erased...and sometimes letting them out...can be relieving and destructive as well...
    I really love this!
    :)
    ~S

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much for your kind words! I am so glad you liked it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Mark

    Beautiful!... Letting go of the pain...

    • 8 years ago

      by Brenda

      Indeed, thank you so much!

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Thanks everybody! I really appreciate your thoughtful comments. Michael, I like the word beasties too lol. I think I will let my beasties in my head stay sleeping.

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