Empty feelings (palidrome-line by line)

Brenda.. WOW! This has me trying to even come up with words of how perfect this is.. Well done

"Wow"...that is so Heavy!! You can just FEEL the weight in your words... x_x
Excellent writing. You had a way of really leaving the reader heavy with feeling and sympathy as well. 3:

I love this Brenda, my favorite line being the first.....Afraid of waking sleeping dogs.....
Very clever!

Brenda, this is a very thought provoking, sad yet wonderfully written piece that could be taken more ways than one if I am honest but I guess thats what great poetry it about. I haven't really seen many of these written especially on here but I guess as Ben said they take a lot of hard work and perseverance to do them as well as you did, I know I couldn't master one thats for sure.

As they say sleeping dogs are best left alone.
Great work, Em

Brenda,

A very clever little write. I first saw Naughtymouse (Ben) writing one of these and I really do respect the thought that must go into them.

Excellent work.

Take care.