William,

A beautifully written and really well-rhymed love poem. A pleasure to read.

All the best,

Ben

William this is very well written with a great unforced rhyme and I feel one of the most sincerest love poems I have read for a little while. When you read it aloud it reads even smoother and has a beautiful beat.

Take care, Em

William,
This is truly so well written and beautiful. I read it several times because it was so pretty and sincere. So nice to read poetry like this.

My comment is not in this poem or its not showing up..
it does not matter anyway because I can just keep reading it
again and again and know the meaning behind..

Love is simple for others who are viewing it is complicated
but the bottom line is where there is understanding and knowing
each other without having to say anything love flourishes no matter
the distance, cast or religion..liked this :)

Can't help it...had to come back and read it...and thought you
would have had another new poem up!

I like the third verse...like it overall...