Comments : They Told Me

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is moving, sad and well written.

    The line 'But what happens when the good times make you cry' is excellent. How true: in these kinds of situations, what else do we have to cling to and yet how can those memories do anything else than upset us further?

    'They' say a lot of things, don't they?

    Great write. Take care,

    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    This is so sad. It seems as though people were just giving you lip service while you are hurting so incredibly bad over the loss of your friend. I love your last stanza and how you noted they were no where around. Well done-